Who wants a never before seen sneak peek at my modern retelling of Mary Shelley's Frankenstein? You?? Awesome! Then read on my lovelies, read on...
(unedited excerpt from BROKEN releasing January 8th, 2013)
“Hellooo?” Bree’s
face is suddenly inches from mine. Her ice blue eyeshadow glinting in the
sunlight. “Earth to Emma.”
“Sorry,” I mutter,
and sip my coffee, “Guess I was spacing out.”
“Guess? There’s no
guess about it.”
“Okay, okay.” I
drop to my knees, coffee cup raised, other hand wrapped around it like I’m
praying. From this position, I’m suddenly aware how short her skirt is and what
an awkward position I put myself in. “Forgive me, oh Bree, for I have sinned!”
“Ha!” she snorts,
cheeks blushing scarlet when she hooks her hand in my elbow and hoists me to my
feet. “Get up before the new guy sees you down there and gets the wrong
impression.”
“New guy?” A shard
of the reflection I’d seen earlier stabs in the dark behind my eyes.
“Yeah.” She wraps
her hand in mine and drags me toward the wheelchair ramp leading to the side
door. Once in the fractured shade of the maple tree, she points along the
sidewalk, halfway down the gym complex. “Mr. You Don’t See Me with his hood
up.” She leans around me, does a little wiggle meant to hike her skirt higher
hands-free. “And I wanna see what he’s hiding under there.”
I follow where
she’s pointing. Coming toward us walks the 3-D version of the reflection I’d
seen. His entire look seems crafted to draw, and shun attention. His clothes
are definitely designer, but with the hood up and shoulders hunched he appears
to not want the attention the girls at Shelley High are going to give him. His
head tips up just enough to catch a glint of his eyes. The world narrows,
everything falls away, cleaved from existence the moment he meets my eyes.
Then his gaze
falls. Life crashes back in with the force of a million vicious whispers.
Rumors whisk in
front of him, brittle as fall leaves, darker than crows in a murder.
2 comments:
Love it!!!
That last line...amazing.
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